Remember the expression “It’s fate!” I always thought that was a cop out, meaning you’d might as well give up, there’s no bucking the system, so why try? Why resist? But in today’s Weekend Writing Warrior’s excerpt, it’s just the excuse my WIP characters need to stop fighting the pull they feel between them . . .
“I don’t want to lose you. But I already have, haven’t I? You’re a million miles away right now and almost out of reach.”
“I’m right here.”
His argument brought her to him, her knee stepping over his lap to straddle him, arms circling his shoulders, face nestling against the curve of his throat where she felt his hard swallow. He held tight, trying to believe they could make this moment last, this glorious, fiery, tender moment that offered so much and promised so little.
“You are my prince,” she whispered, breath moist and soft against his neck, “my Prince of Cups. You rode into my life bringing romance and shaking my world to its foundation that first night I met you. It was in the cards.”
Funny, she didn’t bother to tell him the card after the Knight of Cups was the Tower, bringing destruction to all she knows and loves . . . but I guess I can leave that for another post.
Finally, good weather and a good loooong weekend. I’m using mine to add to the 75K on PRINCE OF DREAMS and celebrate my birthday. And to remember . . .
What are your weekend plans, fellow warriors?
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Finally, good weather and a good loooong weekend. I’m using mine to add to the 75K on PRINCE OF DREAMS and celebrate my birthday. And to remember . . .
What are your weekend plans, fellow warriors?
Weekend Writing Warriors is a weekly hop for everyone who loves to write! Share an 8 to 10 sentence snippet of your writing on Sunday. Visit other participants on the list and read, critique, and comment on their 8sunday posts.
Spread the word, share the love, warriors - Hashtag #8sunday.
Feels like quite the bittersweet moment
ReplyDeleteThe tug that can go either way . . .
DeleteWhat a woman. You go, Nancy!
ReplyDeleteI like a heroine who knows her own mind! Thanks, Charmaine!
DeleteLove it! Fabulous snippet. Very evocative.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Christiane!
DeleteA poignant moment, when things could go either way, it seems. Enjoyed the snippet!
ReplyDeleteYes, it can and does. Thanks, Jean!
DeleteFantastic and romantic snippet, and I love that mug! If only I were the youngest... ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Amy. Yeah, the youngest is the place to be!
DeleteLovely moment between them. And the tower card offers hope for renewal, so, you know, once she gets past all the destruction and despair...I get the sense he's worth it.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Alexis. Yep, the Tower is a do over card and he definitely is!
DeleteSo romantic, and a little scary. Hope you have a Happy Birthday!
ReplyDeleteYes, it is! Oh, you meant the scene. Yes, much more romantic and a little scary than turning 63!
DeleteWhat a beautiful, tender, and sexy moment. I always enjoy reading your excerpts, Nancy, because they're packed with so much emotion. Happy birthday/long weekend to you! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Julie! As always, over too soon (but the rest of the year doesn't have to be in such a rush!)
DeleteAs the eldest,I sadly agree with that mug. My sister should have it. LOL The snippet has such a layer of sadness under it. I hope things turn out all right for the characters. And Happy Birthday!
ReplyDeleteMine both fit the bill perfectly for theirs. Thanks, Elyzabeth.
DeleteSensual, tender scene. Nicely written!
ReplyDeleteHappy, happy birthday!
Maybe a little fire later in the fire ring, s'mores, mountain pies, wine. lol
Thanks, Teresa! Oooh, I like the way you plan a birthday!
DeleteGreat snippet, just enough steamy and mysterious. Happy Birthday!
ReplyDeleteThank you , Brittany! Yes indeed!
DeleteFabulous snippet! Such tender emotion with an undertone of wonder that things just might work out. This series is on my summer TBR list!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jenna!! Just might is always the teaser . . .
DeleteI hope this turns out well between them.
ReplyDeleteThat's always the hope . . . how they get there is the fun!
Delete"I couldn't help it" is always a... well, not good, but... an excuse. Lots of chemistry here!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Caitlin! Yeah, that darned Fate. Whatcha gonna do?
DeleteSorry I'm even later than usual getting round to commenting this week, but I hope you had a great birthdya. Lovely sensuous snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Lyn! I certain did!
DeleteWhew! Is it hot in here or is it the weather??? Very nice scene. You just ramped up the sexual tension. Good job.
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