Strength doesn’t always mean physical prowess. It can be in toughness of character, determination in actions, risks on behalf of righteousness. Kendra steps up her game without losing the tenderness of heart her mate fell in love with, even as she challenges his choices and fights for her place at his side when he’d send her back to safety. You go, Katy! Way to shake things up and stand by your man!
“I don’t know what he needs from me, Bree, if anything at all.”
Her cousin laughed and reminded, “You charge in on a motorcycle, dragging his brothers behind you all because you sense he might need you. He was a beast before you, a wreck without you, and he thinks he can conquer the world as long as you’re at his side. All he needs is for you to be you and for you to be there.”
Kendra heard his quiet petition echo.
“Stay.”
“Do you want to be his queen, Kendra, surrounded by his brothers, his problems and his enemies every day for the rest of your life? Do you love him, and yourself, enough to share him with what he has to do to be who he is?”
“Yes, that’s what I want.”
“Then quit your whining, find him, bang him brainless, and let the rest take care of itself.”
Here’s how Kendra sees her evolution over the next books of the “House of Terriot” series . . .
And yes, that is my favorite bad boy hero, Jeremy Renner in guy-liner!
I’m mourning the loss of an hour’s worth of a.m. daylight that makes getting up early to write that much harder! Sigh, such is the price of spring.
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LOL Sometimes everyone needs a Brigit. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteLOL! The real queen of blunt reality.
DeleteAlways fun and interesting. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed, Charmaine!
DeleteFantastic snippet, I loved it! And yes to Signorney Weaver type characters!
ReplyDeleteThank you!! Tough grrrls unite!
DeleteHell yeah, go girl! :)
ReplyDeleteLOL! Yes, indeed, Barb!
DeleteGood advice to just be herself and quit overthinking things! Enjoyed the snippet...
ReplyDeleteDon't we all need that reminder?
DeleteI enjoy watching characters grow and change as they step up to face challenges. Kendra is definitely one of those characters.
ReplyDeleteShe's a long way but is still a work in progress . . .
DeleteLove that last line! Straight to the point!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Ian!!
DeleteThis line says it all! “Then quit your whining, find him, bang him brainless, and let the rest take care of itself.”
ReplyDeleteGreat scene!
Thank you, Karen!
DeleteYou convey the toughness of this group of women beautifully.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Ed. That, they are, because they have to be.
DeleteNice excerpt. "Bang him brainless." LOL And yet, so much truth there. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Diana!
DeleteOutstanding! Sometimes things need to be simplified. We can make things so much more complicated than they need to be. :-)
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely love that last line.
Doubts and overthinking can get in our way of what we want and what's best for us. We all need a Brigit to smack us upside the head once in awhile.
DeleteLove her! Got a big kick out of Brigit's advice. Right on! I love reading these stories again. Can't wait to see what's next.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Di!!
DeleteMemorable last line and straight to the point.
ReplyDeleteLike a arrow of truth!
DeleteI think Brigit's got the right idea. Even if she's a little blunt about it.
ReplyDeleteLove that last line.
All of my characters, male and female alike, are screwed up in some way.
ReplyDeleteWhen I was younger, all my heroine characters were conventionally pretty. As I've gotten older, none of them are.