The Excerpt
“Just how far do we have to go to meet with this informant?”
He didn’t turn. “We’re not meeting anyone.”
More cautious now, Charlotte pressed, “You said you had important information for me.”
“I believe what I said was I wanted you to come with me for an enlightening ride.”
More silence as he imagined her processing that in her coolly clever cop brain until she reached the proper conclusion. She stopped walking. Despite the ripe smell of the swamps, her scent enveloped him, a sultry tease of Voodoo Love that never failed to cast its spell. Contrarily, her words were as sharp as a knife’s edge.
“Did Jimmy ask you to take me for this ride?”
. . . and a bit more . . .
Even though she hid it well, alarm shivered through her voice. His reputation for seeing Legere’s dirty deeds done wasn’t exaggerated. He’d killed at his mentor’s command more than once, and always without hesitation. It’s what he was, what he did. But the thought of Charlotte on the other end of that order unsettled him, giving him pause when he should have been planning.
There was no place for uncertainty in Max’s linear world. Jimmy spoke, he obeyed. That’s how it would always be. He’d only deviated from that narrow path once before, when he’d broken all the rules to save a bold young girl from a terrible situation she didn’t deserve. That girl, who had no memory of her savior, was as fearless then as the woman she’d become was now.
“Jimmy believes you’re too dangerous,” he told her, moving his hands away from his body in a non-threatening manner, “that you can’t be reasoned with or ignored.”
A grim laugh. “He’d be right about that. So tell me, Max. Was this ride supposed to be round trip or just one way?”
Then he turned toward her, not surprised to find her in a defensive stance, her police issue in hand and aimed at his midsection. He smiled at her bravado. “I haven’t decided yet.”
With a gun pointed at him - he'd better make up his mind quickly. Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteOh he will!
Deletewow, intense scene! Shared.
ReplyDeleteWhat's a paranormal without lots of edge of your seat?
DeleteThey make a doubly dangerous couple!
ReplyDeleteIndeed they do!
DeleteWow! What a scene. Will this be reissued in Kindle format?
ReplyDeleteIt's from a short three page read. I'll probably tuck it into the back of BOUND BY MOONLIGHT when it's reissued as extra content.
DeleteThey are such a great couple and this excerpt was highly intriguing (plus I always enjoy your glimpses into the days of trad pub of yore).
ReplyDeleteThose WERE the days!
DeleteIntense. Yeah, he better decide and quickly. But given who he is, not sure a bullet would do much.
ReplyDeleteNot unless it's silver.
DeleteWow, I really liked that snippet. Can't wait to read more. Lots of info in just a few sentences.
ReplyDeleteWatch for it in the back of BOUND BY MOONLIGT when it's reissued this year.
DeleteI love her gutsy attitude. How well does she know Max at this point? Does she think she can deter him with a gun only? And I loved how you slipped in the little bit of history between them that she doesn't know. Sounds like a fantastic book! Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteThis wasn't from a book but rather a creative snippet using my By Moonlight characters. It was really fun to do.
DeleteWow. What a tense scene. She sure is gutsy. But then she has to be to stand up to Max.
ReplyDeleteGuts has never been her problems!
DeleteI love the layers of concern and distrust here with touches of attraction and fondness.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Eden!
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