WeWriWa: She could lose her life . . . but he’s risking his soul! MIDNIGHT MASQUERADE – Just $0.99 Sept. 1-15

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WeWriWa: She could lose her life . . . but he’s risking his soul! MIDNIGHT MASQUERADE – Just $0.99 Sept. 1-15


I love, love, LOVE sinking my teeth into a good vampire story and MIDNIGHT MASQUERADE has everything one looks for: An invitation too good to be true for a down on his luck New Orleans attorney running from the darkness of his past. A mystery she’d give everything to solve, including her detective shield—up to and including her own life! A D.C. law firm where its after dark business is anything but usual. Sink your teeth into MIDNIGHT MASQUERADE!

Midnight Masquerade (Touched by Midnight - Book 8)

Published: May 4, 2011
Length: 234 Pages

Can they escape the shadows of the past?

This time, he could lose his soul . . .
An invitation to join an exclusive D.C. law firm seems like a chance for Nick Flynn to leave his mistakes behind. But it's his shadowy past and unrealized inheritance that attracted his mysterious employers. Once embroiled in their dark schemes, his struggle for success becomes a battle for his salvation.

And she could lose her life . . .
Loner detective Rae Borden goes undercover as a call girl to discover the truth about her best friend's death. Her carefully laid plan of revenge and personal redemption becomes a crusade against an unbelievable evil . . . with Nick Flynn in the middle.

"Nancy Gideon is one of the best supernatural writers on the market today!" — Midwest Book Review/BookWire

 The Excerpt 

Kazmir Zanlos’s corner office shimmered with chrome and reflective surfaces, reminding Nick of the man himself, both dazzling the eye, but allowing no hint of the depth behind that polished exterior . . . or the decay. As a boy, he’d thought to wade out into still, clear waters trying to catch a frog only to find himself mired in the deadly quicksand concealed under the deceptively placid illusion. He felt the same way now, only Kaz Zanlos wasn’t sucking at his feet, he was devouring his soul, and like that child stuck in the bog, he wasn’t sure how to extricate himself.

While he waited, Nick glanced about the surroundings that had so impressed him upon his first interview. The obvious wealth, the scent of success, the reflection of everything he desired—for a price he hadn’t known he’d have to pay. 

Who was he trying to kid? By the time Zanlos had come to him, he’d already sold his soul for success so who was he to throw stones? If he hadn’t known what Zanlos was from the get-go, it was because he hadn’t wanted to know, still didn’t want to know, even though that truth beat at him like a morning-after headache. He couldn’t condemn Zanlos because they were birds of a feather. Those birds were vultures, circling in search of ripe carrion.


This book was literally born riding the escalator featured on the original front cover. It leads to the underground metro train where my writer friends and I traveled from the conference hotel into the city to shop during afternoon breaks and to hit the theatre – after dark when at its creepiest. The angle was so steep, you couldn’t see the top or the bottom from the other end. The temperature dropped to shiver-inducing chilliness during the ride down. And the prologue came to life during one of those up close and too personal descents when someone dropped their keys.  Brrrrr!

I’ll be at a writers’ getaway out of town next weekend so I may not be here. If not, Write On!



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6 comments

  1. Interesting snippet, although I couldn't figure out who Kazmir Zanlos was - sorry ;-)

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  2. Tough to admit you're just like the one you're trying to avoid becoming.

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  3. The tension in this snippet is palpable. And the imagery just draws you into the story. Great snippet. I've been on that escalator in DC that seems like it's going straight down into hell--at least for me as I am very afraid of heights. I do need to read this as I love books set in places I'm familiar with. Tweeted.

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    1. And the cold that comes with that drop . . . brrrrr! Especially when it was in the high '80s outside. Give into the need to read!

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