It was the bravest damn thing he’d ever seen. She was only a little bit of a thing, so delicate she might have been confused with a girl as she’d dashed in front of his stopped car. While others watched, himself included, she’d scrambled into that compact, heedless of the danger, to bring out the little boy, and if that wasn’t enough, she’d gone back toward certain death to save the kid’s parents, which she couldn’t, of course—Jess had known that the moment he saw the fuel ignite, but it hadn’t stopped her from trying. She’d fought him like a madwoman when he’d pulled her away, barely seconds before she’d have been engulfed in the same fiery ball that consumed the car, fought with such an amazing strength in such a tiny package, that he’d been awed by her. Until this event had played out before his disbelieving eyes, he’d shunned stories of heroism, and then he’d felt the frantic beat of her big, big heart against his chest, felt the helpless trembling of her despair as he held her in his arms, and never had anything touched him so strongly, so powerfully, so tenderly as that moment, as that woman.
Why had she taken the money?
He saw so much ugliness, so much greed, he’d wanted to believe unselfish goodness was possible, to believe the tears he saw on her face were genuine, in her anguish over others instead of her own pain, and he’d wanted to hold on to the emotions that filled his soul with such possessiveness as he’d cradled her close and tried to give her comfort. In that brief slice of time she’d reached inside him and torn out his heart . . . and then broke it by proving all his illusions false. Charlene Carter wasn’t a saint willing to throw down her life to save another’s. When she’d been quick to snap up the fee for her bravery, in his jaded eyes that made Miss Carter a mercenary, not a Samaritan, and Jess hated her for it . . . because he’d wanted to believe.
He doesn’t trust that she’s for real . . .
Jess McMasters exposes frauds for a living, and if it means using his charms as well as his tough skills as a journalist, no problem. What’s Charlene Carter trying to gain by refusing to be interviewed by the press? Is she angling for more money—or is she hiding secrets that prove she’s nobody’s hero?
Jess goes undercover to get close to her, but the closer he gets, the less he understands. Except this: the cost for his deception could be his own heart.
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Congratulations on the reissues. You didn't even have to go to the bother of self-publishing them!
ReplyDeleteI know! Less royalty but also less stress.
DeleteDouble the success. Good luck again, my friend. It's an omen.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Charmaine. Fingers crossed . . .
DeleteCongrats on re-issues. Hope they do wonderfully.
ReplyDeleteTerrifying situation a burning car.
Love the last line - so much hope there.
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Thank you, Victoria!!
DeleteThe excerpt was amazing, Nancy. So glad that Belle Books is reissuing these gems!
ReplyDeleteRecycling works for me!!
DeleteCongrats on the re-issues! And this was a wonderfully emotional snippet. :D
ReplyDeleteThanks, Amy!! Getting paid without having to do the work . . . again.
DeleteIf he wants to believe so much maybe he should give her the benefit of the doubt.
ReplyDeleteCongratulation on the reissuing!
You'd think!! That's the trouble with setting such a high bar. No one can get over it without knocking it down.
DeleteCongrats on getting these stories picked up again. I can feel his hope for a hero dwindle away. Though I hope she took the money for a reason he's yet to uncover. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jessica! A very good reason and he'll suffer for his jump to conclusions, trust me!
DeleteHis judgment seems a bit harsh and unfounded since she had no idea the kid had rich family when she risked her life to rescue him. But hey, romance! And it makes the story work :) VERY delighted for you about the reissues, which is terrific news. and the excerpt was marvelous as always :)
ReplyDeleteHe's a '90s guy, what can you expect? You'd think almost 20 years would lighten him up some!
DeleteWhat a great excerpt - bravery, drama, human emotions - everything is there. Good luck with the re-issue.
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOU, Rachel!
DeleteDefinitely held in high esteem. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Angelica!!
DeleteCongrats on the reissues! Great snippet! And notice how much of a genius I am for finally figuring out why I couldn't comment on blogger blogs??!! Cookies problem...sheesh.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Dr. E! My cookie problems are usually on my hips!
DeleteWow, he sure is cynical, isn't he? Thrilling excerpt and congrats on the reissue!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Christina!! Soured on life, more like.
DeleteHe may be cynical, but I bet it still hurt him to think the worst.
ReplyDeleteDevastated enough to follow through . . .
DeleteBoy, he's jumping to conclusions, isn't he? He's got a lot to learn!
ReplyDeleteAnd he's about to get schooled!
DeleteI can see why he's upset, but if the money was freely offered (and not any sort of financial burden on the giver), why not take it? She did rescue that boy, after all.
ReplyDeleteA higher plane of integrity, I assume. I'd have taken it!
DeleteHow wonderful Belle Books picked up those books. This one sounds so fascinating--like watching an accident about to happen. You know what will happen when she discovers his duplicity. He's going to be in deep doo-doo.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Di! An accident ready to happen, indeed!
DeleteBrilliant snippet, Nancy. This story sounds awesome!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kim!!
DeleteBrilliant snippet, Nancy. This story sounds awesome!
ReplyDeleteI don't have a book budget at the moment, but I love the premise and the snippet! Congratulations on the reboot!
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