The Excerpt
As they left the sprawl of clustered communities behind for long stretches of tangled wilderness, Silas used all his concentration to control his breathing, his heartbeat, even his perspiration lest Savoie scent something was wrong. If the ruthless clan leader sensed the darkness swirling through his soul at being within reach of the cause of his ruin, Max would act without mercy. As his father had before him. So Silas calmed his respirations, quieted his fevered thirst for revenge, and played the role of cop and submissive rather than that of avenger, even as it beat savagely in his heart.
Wait. Patience would be rewarded.
He had to be very, very careful in his game of diplomacy. By making this offering to Savoie, he hoped to gain a level of trust that would give him access to other key opportunities. And if Nica became too great a danger, having Savoie as an ally wouldn’t be a bad thing. She wasn’t afraid to go boldly after him, but Savoie’s presence might give her pause. Silas didn’t want to be the one to take her life . . . and truth be told, he didn’t care to order it done.
(. . . and a bit more . . .)
If an alliance with Savoie could get her to stand down and give him room to finish his business, he would make it, temporarily. He would see to his family’s future first, then satisfy his own need for restitution. And maybe both he and Nica would walk out alive.
“Where do your loyalties lay, MacCreedy?”
Savoie’s question startled him. Had the mobster sensed the direction of this thoughts? “What do you mean?”
“Are you a cop or are you of the clans? Which comes first if you have to choose?”
“I enjoy being a detective, but it doesn’t define what I am inside.” He glanced next to him to find Savoie’s intent stare upon him. “Just like you’re a criminal but that’s not who you are down deep where it counts.”
A smile quirked Savoie’s lips at that cynical comparison. He gave a nod. “Then we are much the same. On the surface.”
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That last paragraph - so interesting. The criminal and the officer - not so different - on the surface. Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteThey employ a lot of the same dynamics to get the job done.
DeleteI really liked the idea that both of them play roles--one the criminal and one the detective, but they aren't the roles that define them. That idea alone makes me want to read this book. Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteI love twisty turny motivations!
DeleteLoyalty is a tricky thing. Nice snippet!
ReplyDeleteA slippery slope, indeed!
Deletelove this
ReplyDeleteThanks, Darrell!!
DeleteThe fact that our professions don't define us is something I really struggled with when I had to go on disability. I wasn't sure who I was without my work to define me.
ReplyDeleteI was lucky to have had a break mid--employment life to tend my boys until they started school. I LOVED being a stay at home mom which led to my life as a serious writer (which I ALWAYS considered myself to be.)
DeleteVery much the same, but different. Love it. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jeff!!
DeleteWhat a great response, near perfect. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE it when dialog really works!
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