The Excerpt
“Tell me what I must do.”
“You need only survive, young sir. Survive to conquer the years, the centuries, however long it takes for you to seek out her tortured soul.”
“However long it takes,” Gabriel affirmed, not truly understanding the magnitude of his pledge.
“Then you will be transformed this very night so you might begin your search in an existence where time holds no meaning.”
He never saw her physically move.
One instant, she was staring at him with an almost hypnotic intensity, distracting him from the fact that the three of them were no longer alone in the room. Shadows shifted from within the unnatural stillness to become figures looming just out of the light.
He heard Rolland’s briefly uttered warning and the rasp of his sword, but Gabriel had no time to react with alarm or instinct. The crone was upon him, knocking him flat upon his back.
(. . . and a tasty bit more . . .)
His hands were gripped before they could find sword and dagger in his own defense. And then came the pain, swift and sharp, at his throat, at his wrists and elbows. He tried to cry out, but no sound of protest came either to mouth nor eventually to mind.
So this was death, this slow, chill sinking into dark oblivion.
He surrendered to the sapping weakness of body even as a part of him clung to the strength of his resolve.
For Naomi.
wow, intense snippet!
ReplyDeleteEverything about this book had me on the edge of my seat while typing!
DeleteDeep POV - makes it intense. Sounds like a wonderful time at retreat. Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteRetreat is my favorite time of year. Writing time and friend zone time in a lovely setting . . . Sigh!
DeleteIt's true that a phrase like "however long it takes" doesn't seem as overwhelming in the moment as it's sure to become. Loved the excerpt!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kate!!
DeleteIt does sound as though he hasn't a clue what he's getting into, but I want to know what happens when he realizes what's just happened. So I just bought the book! :) Great snippet! Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jenna!! Happy reading!
DeleteQuestions of it being reality or figurative prose. Intense scene, fabulous. Also, I posted, just forgot to input my link this week.
ReplyDeleteDon't worry, we'll find you!!
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