The Excerpt
He studied the toes of his boots for a moment, building up to something. “About the money.”
“We agreed on one thousand dollars. I’ll have it for you when I see my brother again.”
He looked up. Blue, she noticed with some surprise, his eyes were blue, not a fierce black, but blue as searingly clear and intense as the midday West Texas sky in startling contrast to the darkness of his complexion.
“I was hoping to get it upfront.”
Amanda smiled. She may not have had a great deal of worldly experience, but money was one thing she understood very well, having handled it all her life. “Mr. Bass, I don’t know you from Adam. If I handed you a thousand dollars, I’d have no guarantee of ever seeing you again.”
“You have my word on it.”
“I’m sorry, but that’s not enough.”
( . . . and a bit more . . .)
Not so much as a muscle twitched in his impassive face, his expression suddenly granite hard. “How do I know you’ll pay me once the job’s done, especially if the news I bring back isn’t good?”
“I guess you’ll just have to trust me.”
“I’m sorry, Miss Duncan, but I’m not that trusting, either.”
“Well, it seems we’re at a standoff unless you’ll agree to another proposition.” She could feel his tension as he waited and watched her. “I’ll give you five hundred dollars now for a horse, supplies, and all expenses. And I’ll pay you the full thousand dollars when the job’s done.”
“I already have a horse.”
“But I don’t, and I’ll be going with you.”
What a fabulous trip! I love New Orleans, too. And I like your savvy heroine, great move. Good luck with the scanning/recreating process!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Adriana! Tech is not my forte but thankful I have a very clever virtual asst. Looking over my pictures from NOLA -- Sigh!
DeleteI have never been to New Orleans, so I still have that trip to look forward to. It sounds absolutely fabulous. So does your H/h. They certainly seem evenly matched as far as spunk and determination goes! Can't wait to read more. Good luck on your re-creation of the lost books! Tweeted
ReplyDeleteIt's a dirty job, rebuilding a book, but hopefully worth it. I also have a fantastic VA to help me.
DeleteA good compromise, and one he didn't expect, I'm sure! Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteOh, I wonder whether he likes that idea :-) Nice compromise, though !
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