The Excerpt
She swept the area with a professional stare, studying the scene with a cop’s attention to detail. The press were everywhere, seeking scraps to tantalize the public’s hunger for information, the more sensational, the better.
She scowled, wishing she had the authority to make them scatter like the vultures they were. Unfortunately, she wasn’t here in an official capacity. She couldn’t brush them off with a flick of her badge tonight.
And as she looked over their feeding ground, she asked herself yet again, What the hell am I doing here?
As her attention was caught by the most controversial criminal figure in New Orleans, she knew. He was hard to miss as he stepped out of a sleek dark town car, impossible to look away from as he came toward her, all lethal grace and fixed intensity. A shiver rode across her skin. She was here for Max Savoie.
. . . and a bit more . . .
Sleek, powerful, all deadly poetry. His animalistic aggression masked by smooth, easy strides still provoked all her senses, the same way it had the very first time she’d seen him walk through the station in handcuffs eight years ago as if nothing could touch him.
For this occasion, he wore the sophisticated trappings of a wealthy businessman. Tailored Armani created a glossy image but couldn’t disguise his harshly cut features. A bristle of dark hair arranged by the drag of fingers rather than careful barbering, the heavy horizon of solemn black brows above eyes like pale, impenetrable jade added to the ruthless mystique.
Unblinking, unsmiling, he stepped right inside her guarded circle of personal space—and offered his arm. “Ready?”
I’m with you and Cassie about large groups. Give me one-on-one or a small group. Your description of Max sent shivers through me. I so want to read this story again. —Diane Burton
ReplyDeleteWhat's stopping you, Di! Read away!! You and I are such hermits. LOL!
DeleteI'm half and half on social stuff. I like small groups and one-on-one better, but I can be social in other circumstances too (just need downtime afterwards). That's quite a connection Max and CeCe have! Looking forward to more.
ReplyDeleteSmall groups, definitely!
DeleteEnjoyed the excerpt. You bring us right into the scene and carry us along so smoothly and then...we're left wanting more, to keep reading! Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteAs long as I'm not dragging you kicking and screaming!!
DeleteWonderful and evocative description of Max. (I can't even hear my neighbors talk in a noisy crowd.)
ReplyDeleteI practice selective deafness when in crowds.
DeleteOhh. My skin is crawling. Nice work. And write it off, baby!!
ReplyDeleteLOL! Write off, it is!!
DeleteWow--what an image you paint with words... I think I have a crush on Max. lol
ReplyDeleteI'm definitely a stand back and observe kind of girl, too. :-)